http://dollarformyname.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dollarformyname.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] jam_pony_fic 2012-01-18 11:15 pm (UTC)

Re: Fill: Sight and Sound

Oh, wow. You really got me into Joshua's headspace here. I love the loneliness portrayed in sounds of a world he can't be part of, versus the exciting glimpses he catches and longs for. And that last line is killer. Amazing job!
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