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Syrenslure ([identity profile] syrenslure.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] jam_pony_fic 2007-07-05 01:44 am (UTC)

Wonderful syntax and character voice. You've captured Joshua in a way that I can only envy. His thoughts are like speech instead of narrative - very present and real. Good job!
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