This is... I had to go away and come back to it, the imagery's so strong. Ouch, is all I can say, really. *covers face with hands and shudders* That was...I'll be feeling my forehead all day making sure my face is still attached now.
Just a couple of notes, there were a few minor spelling issues - and also the formatting makes it a little difficult to read, since it goes way off the edge of the screen.
Thanks for posting this! And, y'know, putting one of my major squeamish points on the screen in front of me in black and white. ;)
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Date: 2006-09-24 10:09 am (UTC)Just a couple of notes, there were a few minor spelling issues - and also the formatting makes it a little difficult to read, since it goes way off the edge of the screen.
Thanks for posting this! And, y'know, putting one of my major squeamish points on the screen in front of me in black and white. ;)