beta request...
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jam_pony_ficHiya, so I literally just finished.
It's an AU, 494 centric porn piece--kinda. (494 because its prior to the show)
Warnings of non-con (though IMO its really just voyeurism & masturbation, though it is in the dirty/bad/wrong! field)
Virgin 494
Underage (494 is 15 a few months before his 16th birthday)
Kinda, but not: 494/Renfro/OMC
Possible crossed with RPS (atm its not rps, but the OMC could easily be switched to rps)
Word count: 3,345
Right now this is a one shot, but I initially had thoughts of more, but it started to get very complicated, so I’d love to discuss details with someone, to possibly help break it down into smaller bits.
Need a thorough beta on grammar/sentence structure/tenses throughout/consistent with pov (from 494), commas (lack of, too many), etc.
Also to discuss, your advice on rating: R or NC-17? Whether make it a xover with rps, or not?
If you're interested please email me at: denyce36 at yahoo dot com
Thank you! in advance. Now I'm off to get ready for work ;)
It's an AU, 494 centric porn piece--kinda. (494 because its prior to the show)
Warnings of non-con (though IMO its really just voyeurism & masturbation, though it is in the dirty/bad/wrong! field)
Virgin 494
Underage (494 is 15 a few months before his 16th birthday)
Kinda, but not: 494/Renfro/OMC
Possible crossed with RPS (atm its not rps, but the OMC could easily be switched to rps)
Word count: 3,345
Right now this is a one shot, but I initially had thoughts of more, but it started to get very complicated, so I’d love to discuss details with someone, to possibly help break it down into smaller bits.
Need a thorough beta on grammar/sentence structure/tenses throughout/consistent with pov (from 494), commas (lack of, too many), etc.
Also to discuss, your advice on rating: R or NC-17? Whether make it a xover with rps, or not?
If you're interested please email me at: denyce36 at yahoo dot com
Thank you! in advance. Now I'm off to get ready for work ;)
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