Beta help for short fic?

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Anybody? reply or message me, I'll send it any format you prefer. It's short, around 2000 words- set in TC at Christmas, so it's the whole gang. I edited as well as I can, so it shouldn't need too much work as far as spelling/grammar, but I could really use a good readover for canon/IC/is coherent? I really needt to know if it's gone past "internal chaos" to "too confusing to read"? Oh, and it's Christmassy.
(I finally finished the fic I started for the wish list, and the mods said I should go ahead even though, yeah, Christmas is so over!)
*facepalm*
...so if you happen to be wisher D, your call on whether you want first peek or a finished product;)